I see
Black clouds hanging
Over your horizon.
Must I cheer this impending doom?
Perhaps.
(My first attempt at writing a cinquain)
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2 comments:
Lol, I love it. I might have read it as being funny while it was not, though. "I see black clouds hanging over *your* horizon. Must I cheer this impending doom? Perhaps. -CHEER-!" In any case- good job.
Thanks, Tiffany. It does seem funny now but when I first wrote the slightly longer poem upon which this cinquain was based, I was actually feeling bad about having such an evil thought. :)
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